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PostSubject: This will be posted on BSP, posted here to roughdraft   Tue Jun 09, 2009 6:33 pm

The Factory: A Reader Interactive Story

Somewhere in a disclosed location lays The Factory. Inside of this building are many rooms, a cafeteria, workers lounge, bunking, Boss's room, and the forest sized Construct Jungle. The owner has made the announcement, a show that's clearly ripped off of Big Brother/Survivor will be hosted, the winner receiving a half a million dollars! Hopeful contestants are now sending in their registration and it's up to you as the viewers of HBC to help pick who'll be the last person in The Factory.

Hopeful Competitors


Although all these people hope to enter The Factory, only seven can be in the show. You must vote for five different contestants, who I'll keep track of votes for. When the votes are over I'll put in my favors, I'll vote for three people, but my vote will count as two votes. Can't say I don't pick favorites.

Super Jeff- Super Jeff is a green, foot and a half professional Hit-man. He is easily irritated and a master marksman. Although he can't talk he's very expressive with his emotions and caries around a marker and white-board with him. He wants to appear on the show to advertise his “business”. His pistol was confiscated during auditions.

Battalia- A crazed warrior who has complete control over the chewing gum in his mouth. Known for using his insanity as a powerful weapon. He believes himself worthy of being on t.v.

Bob- Bob is a Blip sword master, which is odd since the sword isn't one of the Blip's revered weapons. He's a guy who speaks with action, even when that's not exactly the best idea. He hopes to earn the money to simply never worry about his tuition.

Tim- Tim is a mage-in-training; he is friends with Bob. In his magic school he is know for many explosions in the labs. Tim is known for think about each and every one of his actions, but this also means he sometimes is too late to act. He needs money to pay off tower which is bigger inside then out, pocket dimensions don't come cheap you know.

Captain Hero- Clad in green and yellow, Captain Hero is the superhero stereotype. He'll go on monologues about justice and save the day, to the point it gets kinda annoying. He also has a sidekick who's a vampire watermelon by the name of Walter, but he wasn't allowed to bring him along. He's in this to finally get enough money to pay for the underground layer he's always wanted.

Leech- Leech is a tube-like worm who's head is just a circular mouth with teeth fitting of a leech. Now what makes him odd is that his circumference is about seven inches, he has two boneless arms that end in three craw-like fingers, and that fact he's wearing a bowler. He's a mafia master mind with the ability to control people through sucking there brains, he'll be monitored. He wants money to fund his mafia schemes.

Edit- Simply a physical being of data, okay I guess simple isn't the word. Edit is known to turn traitor when it benefits him, and then again on that same person when opportunity arises again. Edit is really in this for the entertainment.

Kirby- (Note, not exactly cannon) Kirby is, screw it, you all know who Kirby is. Kirby in this representation in a tab bit stubborn and gets himself into some odd scenarios . Kirby needs the money to pay all the taxes he's been refusing to pay.

Yan- Actual name is Yryizen, but good luck pronouncing that without two tongues. Yan is a Gray who crashed on Earth after an accident with testing an escape pod. Yan is rather brash and considers all other humanoid species “monkeys”. He's in this for the fun of it, and to store away money to fix up his pod.

Rylen & Anji- Rylen is a Legion Master, but that's not too important for this. Anji is his assist, a ghost that acts as a helper in combat and legion commanding. Rylen is laid back and often called a compulsive lier, but claims if he was he'd lie even if it didn't benefit him. Anji is a a bit stern and gets frustrated when Rylen doesn't take things seriously. He hopes to get the money, but the main motivation is the fun of the competition, while Anji doesn't really want to come along, but has to due to the LM-Assist contract. (Take up one space, count as one person during votes and the such)

Toenail of Schneider- Schneider was once a powerful warlock who ruled over an army of monsters, then a typical protagonist killed him with a MacGuffin. To try and stop his presence from disappearing from the world he casted a spell to preserve his body as an undead, but since he never before performed necromancy before he ended up as a giant toenail. He hopes to earn money to pay for a new army of monsters; only then can he retrieve the Facecake and return to his old power.

General Pete Fluffaflufagus- A General in the Chipmunk Battalion, Pete Fluffaflufagus has seen many battles against the diabolical squirrel army. Although all chipmunks are known to hold the ability, Pete has proven to be exceptionally well at breathing fire. He is a firm and loyal fellow who will see a battle to it's end. He wants to earn money for the Chipmunk Battalion.

Sargent Crik Filthmor- Brutal and tough, Crik is a important leader in the Roach Swarm, he became well known when he led a full attack against a human base and emerged victoriously. It should be quickly noted that roaches of his species stand upright on two of their legs and are about fire feet tall. Crik is looking for cash to build up his super weapon.

Grud- To Grug what speaks the most is cold, hard cash. He makes a living selling authentic fake watches by alleyways. Known to pull off bribes and accept them, Grud feels being crooked is just business. Grud wants the money, nothing more nothing less.

Demeos- He was once a powerful demon who controlled great power, but he fell to a curse that limited his power. To conserve his power he resides in a form of a red spirit with two floating claws and a blue fire burning on the top of his form. Demeos is very easy to anger but can be quite gentlemanly when in a good mood. He's most likely in this for a chance to attack the owner for the ZurZon Book.

Open Spots- Do you want to see a character of your own up here? If you have a character entry you must post your character and bio, wait for me to put them up (if I do that is) and then you may vote. Important to note, if your character is put up here I'll end up sending you many PM's asking how your character would act or say in certain scenarios, so only suggest you you can put up with that. Also note that I'll have the right to put your character through the plot as I see fit, so if you'd want high control on them then forget about entering them.

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PostSubject: Re: This will be posted on BSP, posted here to roughdraft   Tue Jun 09, 2009 7:22 pm

Comrade wrote:
General Pete Fluffaflufagus- Blahblahblah... Although all chipmunks are known to hold the ability, Pete has proven to be exceptionally well at breathing fire. Blahblah.

Awesome Smiley
I'd vote for this guy

I noticed a few spelling mistakes, but otherwise it sound pretty cool.

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PostSubject: Re: This will be posted on BSP, posted here to roughdraft   Tue Jun 09, 2009 7:24 pm

Spelling mistakes?

SPELLCHECK! WHY HAVE YOU BETRAYED ME?

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PostSubject: Re: This will be posted on BSP, posted here to roughdraft   Tue Jun 09, 2009 7:28 pm

lol, maybe more grammar than spelling. Some double words, and I think you said 'for' instead of 'to' once.

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