I finally wrote somrthing. This an excert from the chapter DVB and Loreic meet SonicTurnip.

DVB put down the mug of coffee and sighed. He had no idea that SonicTurnip's life was horrible. He looked at Loreic who ahd the same look. SonicTurnip noticed the grikm expression on thier faces and decided to lighten the mood. "C'mon guys, I didn't mean glum up this conversation. Anyway, what are you guys doing here in the NYC?" she asked taking a sip of her coffee. "Well SonicTurnip..." Loreic started to say, but she held out her hand. "Rita, my nickname is Rita. SonicTurnip sems a bi too long," she said before letting Loreic continue. "We came because we were to attend someone's funeral," Loriec said. Rita had a sad smile on her face as she said, "You mean Vergil Franklin's funeral?" "How do you him?" DVB asked as he had a bitter smile of his own. "His wife helped me a lot. She's also attending the funeral, her name is Phoebe Franklin. She told me a lot about her husband," she answered.

It has some pretty good flow.

Before i rate this I need to know something....do you know what Ragnarök is?

If you don't i suggest you change the name.

In a nutshell, the Norse version of the Apcoaypse, where the Norse Gods, all the deties are kiiled an d the Great Tree Of Life is destroyed or something like that.

The story is called that becase the word metaporicly ends

DVB: Don't spoil the whole thing!

Ragnarök is the battle of the gods, it is portrayed as the end of the world, although not all of the gods are killed.

and i give it a8/10

also I would like to be in it '_'
(I won't care if you don't include me, use the name Spike if you do though thanke)

Between the beginning and the middle of the first book, yes.

You should type all that you have so far, so we know where we're at. We can't be co-authors without knowing what's already happened.

This is Chapter 1 so far.


The sound of thunder boomed across the darks ky. The sound of rain was crashing agaisnt the ceiling as a bell rang. "Finally, time for lunch," DVB said as he grabbed his bag and left the room with his hungry peers. DVB had made his way to the luncroom relatively dry as he sat down in the seat he always sat down at lunch. His neutral face brightened as he saw Loreic, his best and only friend coming and sit. "School's a bore," DVB said as he took a bite of his PB&J.

I'm now accepting character requests, good or evil so to say.

Sam used this song for a theme song, and I decided to make it our main theme sing.

Citizen Soldier, a tribute to the National Guard by Three Doors Down

Ya, since this is a rip of Final Frontier Terra. (Made a movie poster like picture of Loreic Chronicles)

I loosely based it off of that, Loreic.

How about loveingly ripped off?