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Count DVB Hallow Knight
Number of posts : 1285 Age : 30 Location : Imprisoned in High School Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: The Ragnarok Chronicles Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:03 pm | |
| A realistic fiction series I plan to write. Here are the titles in order:
Book I: Armageddon's Catalyst Book II: The Darkest Truth Book III: Waning Faith Book IV: Labyrinth of Corruption Book V: Fallen Earth Book VI: Eternal Hope Book VII: Rapture of Heroes
Hey SonicTurnip, would you like to star in it with me and Loreic? Your role will be roughly the combat medic. | |
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Everybody Loves Dinosaurs Lazyass
Number of posts : 993 Age : 30 Location : Derp Registration date : 2008-08-10
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:07 pm | |
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Loreic Dunsparce vs Slowpoke
Number of posts : 892 Age : 31 Location : All the little angels rise up, rise up. Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:44 pm | |
| I have to say. Those titles scared me to Tartarus. | |
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Count DVB Hallow Knight
Number of posts : 1285 Age : 30 Location : Imprisoned in High School Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:45 pm | |
| A tale of a little bit of everything, but mainly on the world as a whole. Here the character bios, they're incomplete. Name: DVB (Diego-real name) Age: 18 Gender: Male Role: Leader, Marksman, Cook Skills: Able to take apart and rebuild almost any device, also physically strongest of the group. Large information on engineering on massive quanitiy of devices as well as expert balcksmith. Speaks English, Spanish, Italian, Latin and Esperanto Weapon: Beretta Px4 Storm and occasional crowbar Personality: He's very intelligent, kind and caring. However, he is short-tempered, can talk for hours, and occasionaly impatient. He has few friends, however, those he regards as friends, he will protect to the bitter end. These people include Loreic and Rita. He is also the only one to call them by thier real names. (Sam and Lauren). (Yes, eventually we'll have to use our real FIRST names.) He often spaces out and is very imaginative. However, despite being happy-go-lucky, he is very deep and only to his two friends, he cries and reveals his actual emotions at the spot. Theme Song: Unwell Looks: The same as my sprites. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Name: Mace Loreic (Sam- real name) Age: 19 Gender: Male Role: 2nd in command, Hacker, Money Tracker Skills: Master hacker. He can any device and that alone makes him a valuable asset. He also knows alot more than DVB on computer engineering. The smartest of the group as well as the tallest. Photographic memory and speaks English, French, German, Latin,and Esperanto. Weapon: Hand-crafted tasers, based off of this. Shot out of Benelli M3. Also carries obesidian knives. Personality: With friends- Very talkitive In public- keeps to self. In geniral loves learning and can argue with any one and won't give up till right. Theme Song: White and Nerdy Looks: The same as sprites (Less pointy hair and those typical plastic nerd glasses) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Name: Sonic (Rita- Real name.) Age: 18 Gender: Female Role: Combat Medic, Chemical Specialist, Co-cook Skills: Has a large grasping of antomy, chemistry and medicine. The fastest member of the group and a very skilled doctor as well as co-cook. Speaks English, French, Sign Language, Latin, and Esperanto. Weapon(s): Chain whip, poison tipped arrows, chemichal weapons such as small explosives, smoke bombs, poisions. Personality: Caring, kind, smart. She'd help anyone she can as long as they're not an enemy. Athough she is very smart she usually jumps to conclusions or acts too quickly. She tends to keep a lot to herself. She can be shy with strangers, and she even has trouble trusting her friends. She sometimes spaces out, mostly at night, lost in her own thoughts. Don't think that means she can't be talkative once and a while. If you get her started on anything medical or chemichal she could go on for hours explaining it. Theme Song: Call Me When You're Sober Bio: Coming Soon Looks:But her cat hat is a black nurses hat with a green plus, and she doesn't have the doll. You're free to finish your bio.
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Everybody Loves Dinosaurs Lazyass
Number of posts : 993 Age : 30 Location : Derp Registration date : 2008-08-10
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Sat Aug 23, 2008 1:57 pm | |
| What time period is it? Is there a certain plot? Is it a war? Are there mythical creatures? | |
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Count DVB Hallow Knight
Number of posts : 1285 Age : 30 Location : Imprisoned in High School Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Sat Aug 23, 2008 2:27 pm | |
| For the first few chapters, present day, but for the rest of the stories, in 2011, though nothing major happenes until the 2nd book. As for the mythical creatures, proably not, but there will be drama. A rough partial abridged summary of Book I: A string of coindences leaves for a gunfight at DVB's school. After stopping it, the victim, an elderly old man teaches DVB and Loreic skills such as gun-fighting, different langauges and other various things. After the old man's death, DVB and Loreic fly to New York to particpate in his funeral. That's where we'll meet you. I'll add more to the summary later on. As for plot, you guys can and probably will have to help me on that, Out of curiosity, is your real name Rita? And the description of your character has to be accurate to the actual you. Mine is pretty close except hair style and clothes. | |
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Everybody Loves Dinosaurs Lazyass
Number of posts : 993 Age : 30 Location : Derp Registration date : 2008-08-10
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Sat Aug 23, 2008 2:50 pm | |
| Well, kinda. I like that name, it's my confirmation name. My name is Lauren. Yeah, I did base her off me. I do tend to get lost in thought a lot. i also chose the pic because it looks like me. My hair looks a lot like that and my eyes are green-brown. | |
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Everybody Loves Dinosaurs Lazyass
Number of posts : 993 Age : 30 Location : Derp Registration date : 2008-08-10
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Sat Aug 23, 2008 3:03 pm | |
| Also, I do speak some french and I love biology. I want to either be a vet or a surgeon. I can't decide. | |
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Count DVB Hallow Knight
Number of posts : 1285 Age : 30 Location : Imprisoned in High School Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Sat Aug 23, 2008 3:06 pm | |
| Nice, anyway, the old man and his wife were once FBI and CIA agents before retiring. We all me the old man once in our lifetime before the story starts. While Loreic and I learn from him, his wife teaches you at around the same time. | |
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Everybody Loves Dinosaurs Lazyass
Number of posts : 993 Age : 30 Location : Derp Registration date : 2008-08-10
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Sat Aug 23, 2008 3:09 pm | |
| Cool. So do you need any backround info about my character? Like a history or anything. | |
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Count DVB Hallow Knight
Number of posts : 1285 Age : 30 Location : Imprisoned in High School Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Sat Aug 23, 2008 3:13 pm | |
| That'll help. I'll put mine up soon. Anyway, I'll probably post part of the story tommarrow. | |
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Loreic Dunsparce vs Slowpoke
Number of posts : 892 Age : 31 Location : All the little angels rise up, rise up. Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Sun Aug 24, 2008 2:52 pm | |
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Count DVB Hallow Knight
Number of posts : 1285 Age : 30 Location : Imprisoned in High School Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Sun Aug 24, 2008 5:53 pm | |
| I'll try to put something of the story today. | |
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Everybody Loves Dinosaurs Lazyass
Number of posts : 993 Age : 30 Location : Derp Registration date : 2008-08-10
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Sun Aug 24, 2008 6:21 pm | |
| Update. Because every character needs a traumatic history ^_^ | |
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Count DVB Hallow Knight
Number of posts : 1285 Age : 30 Location : Imprisoned in High School Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Sun Aug 24, 2008 6:53 pm | |
| Oh god, I pray your actual life is nothing like that. | |
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Count DVB Hallow Knight
Number of posts : 1285 Age : 30 Location : Imprisoned in High School Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Sun Aug 24, 2008 9:15 pm | |
| I finally wrote somrthing. This an excert from the chapter DVB and Loreic meet SonicTurnip.
DVB put down the mug of coffee and sighed. He had no idea that SonicTurnip's life was horrible. He looked at Loreic who ahd the same look. SonicTurnip noticed the grikm expression on thier faces and decided to lighten the mood. "C'mon guys, I didn't mean glum up this conversation. Anyway, what are you guys doing here in the NYC?" she asked taking a sip of her coffee. "Well SonicTurnip..." Loreic started to say, but she held out her hand. "Rita, my nickname is Rita. SonicTurnip sems a bi too long," she said before letting Loreic continue. "We came because we were to attend someone's funeral," Loriec said. Rita had a sad smile on her face as she said, "You mean Vergil Franklin's funeral?" "How do you him?" DVB asked as he had a bitter smile of his own. "His wife helped me a lot. She's also attending the funeral, her name is Phoebe Franklin. She told me a lot about her husband," she answered. | |
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Loreic Dunsparce vs Slowpoke
Number of posts : 892 Age : 31 Location : All the little angels rise up, rise up. Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Sun Aug 24, 2008 9:18 pm | |
| It has some pretty good flow. | |
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Pyro Blaze General
Number of posts : 477 Age : 30 Location : Backpacking across the country Registration date : 2008-08-10
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Sun Aug 24, 2008 9:26 pm | |
| Before i rate this I need to know something....do you know what Ragnarök is?
If you don't i suggest you change the name. | |
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Count DVB Hallow Knight
Number of posts : 1285 Age : 30 Location : Imprisoned in High School Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Sun Aug 24, 2008 9:29 pm | |
| In a nutshell, the Norse version of the Apcoaypse, where the Norse Gods, all the deties are kiiled an d the Great Tree Of Life is destroyed or something like that. | |
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Loreic Dunsparce vs Slowpoke
Number of posts : 892 Age : 31 Location : All the little angels rise up, rise up. Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Sun Aug 24, 2008 9:32 pm | |
| The story is called that becase the word metaporicly ends
DVB: Don't spoil the whole thing! | |
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Pyro Blaze General
Number of posts : 477 Age : 30 Location : Backpacking across the country Registration date : 2008-08-10
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Sun Aug 24, 2008 9:56 pm | |
| Ragnarök is the battle of the gods, it is portrayed as the end of the world, although not all of the gods are killed.
and i give it a8/10
also I would like to be in it '_' (I won't care if you don't include me, use the name Spike if you do though thanke) | |
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Everybody Loves Dinosaurs Lazyass
Number of posts : 993 Age : 30 Location : Derp Registration date : 2008-08-10
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Mon Aug 25, 2008 10:31 am | |
| - Count DVB wrote:
- Oh god, I pray your actual life is nothing like that.
Lol, no, it's not. I like the story so far. Is it the first book? | |
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Count DVB Hallow Knight
Number of posts : 1285 Age : 30 Location : Imprisoned in High School Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Mon Aug 25, 2008 4:27 pm | |
| Between the beginning and the middle of the first book, yes. | |
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Everybody Loves Dinosaurs Lazyass
Number of posts : 993 Age : 30 Location : Derp Registration date : 2008-08-10
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Tue Aug 26, 2008 10:20 am | |
| You should type all that you have so far, so we know where we're at. We can't be co-authors without knowing what's already happened. | |
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Count DVB Hallow Knight
Number of posts : 1285 Age : 30 Location : Imprisoned in High School Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: The Ragnarok Chronicles Tue Aug 26, 2008 9:14 pm | |
| This is Chapter 1 so far.
The sound of thunder boomed across the darks ky. The sound of rain was crashing agaisnt the ceiling as a bell rang. "Finally, time for lunch," DVB said as he grabbed his bag and left the room with his hungry peers. DVB had made his way to the luncroom relatively dry as he sat down in the seat he always sat down at lunch. His neutral face brightened as he saw Loreic, his best and only friend coming and sit. "School's a bore," DVB said as he took a bite of his PB&J. | |
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